Anyway, finished reading
Past Sins. It certainly is a step above most fanfiction, I can see why it's received the praise it has. A tad too serious for my tastes however, it needed more Pinkie being meta.
But more important than that, I have reached my final verdict on the most important issue regarding this fic: Is Nyx a
Mary Sue?
My verdict is...Neigh.
But it was a close thing, Pen Stroke was walking a thin line.
I come to this decision for 2 reasons.
1. Nyxs origin and reason for being as powerful as she is and having the effect she does on the plot is properly fleshed out and not some
Ass Pull. A defining characteristic of a
Mary Sue, at least for me, is that they need to come out of nowhere, with no explanation given at worst and a generic "I'm the
dark and troubled long lost son/daughter of [important/powerful character in said verse]" at best. Nyxs origin is fully explored and reasonable given the setting.
2. None of the other characters acted too OOC round here in order to facilitate the plot. They came pretty close with DT though, I was tempted to call
Ron the Death Eater on the whole Everfree Forest thing they did. But they still we jerks to Nyx when she apologized at the end, so they at least stayed consistent through the story.