@Ace of Scarabs: So I saw you posted this twice like 20 pages back and no one said anything. I wanted to say the anatomy looks really awesome (I like how the style is a bit less cartoony than the show), but it also doesn't look all that recognizable as Dash, because her hair is all one color. The eye is really good too. About the proportions, the only problem I see is the forelegs, they look a little too skinny and noodly. Also, the tail is held back against her legs, which, since I have a bunch of dogs, makes me think she's scared for some reason. I should not mix dog and pony body language...

Pagetopper:

Hell no, she'd get us caught in seconds.

edited 12th Feb '12 3:07:30 PM by Bluespade

By the way as far as Inti goes, I made an entry under Fridge Brilliance referring to it. My theory is that he actually became a constellation, which is an actual constellation in Equestria given a fictional origin in the books.

edited 12th Feb '12 3:07:03 PM by storyyeller

And unlike Ahuizotl he doesn't get to come back. Sucks to be him.

I wanna fly high. Want a Scootaloo episode about learning to fly if only for a PMV of that song to be made.

edited 12th Feb '12 3:07:20 PM by Badwolfwho

Blue: Hey, I gave him a critique too. This thread just moves so fast that by the time I finished writing it, my post ended up on the next page.

OK, I want to help put with Daring Do!

I'll try to find something useful to do...

@Kuroi: Oh I wasn't trying to shame everyone, just thought it would be sad if he got completely ignored.

@ Storyyeller: Seems kinda weird. I could get if it was formed in the distant past, but it doesn't make sense to give an origin to something that's existed forever and have it be made recently.

That's given me an idea though, the constellation was made in the past via time travel. More examples for Fanon Discontinuity, after all time travel played straight in a series with no previous examples of time travel. Who'd want that?

I still think Ahuizotl being shot in the FACE with a cannon is pretty damn family unfriendly

I think the most entertaining part of writing Cove of Candles is going to be the plot twists you guys have created. That probably holds true for most of these chapters, however.

<3 all of the creativity in here.

If she's being played by Hairerion Trot I want that to be preceded with the line "Get Off My X"

edited 12th Feb '12 3:14:22 PM by Badwolfwho

Ginger: It definitely is, especially if it's supposed to have killed him.

Plus, you get to write for Short Stuff. A character who's considered a scrappy

edited 12th Feb '12 3:14:31 PM by gingerninja666

So I just read the whole DMOS page...I can't believe I just wasted half an hour trekking through that wreck.

Anything about the latest episode?

So basically, I'm writing Daring's equivalent of Scootaloo? Nice. It also seems this is the only chapter that Short Stuff appears in. Ah, and I have to make her annoying. What fun!

edited 12th Feb '12 3:18:27 PM by Alexstrazsa

No...or should I say, not YET anyway.

I'm assuming she's supposed to be the equivalent of Shortround from Temple Of Doom. (The character's original name was even Scootaround, THAT'S how little we originally hid it.)

edited 12th Feb '12 3:26:05 PM by gingerninja666

Am I being requisitioned? I just Thread Hopped around twenty pages, so.

Yeah, I know this is extremely old but I'm trying to catch up. I think it's weird that everyone thought Twist and Applebloom were friends. To me it seemed really clear that they were just classmates who knew each other. When both of them got self-conscious about not having a Cutie Mark, they started hanging out (briefly). I remember Applejack trying to get Applebloom to ask Twist to go to the party with her, and it really sounded like someone's mom trying to arrange a friendship between kids. I don't think the two of them were ever close, hence why they never talk anymore.

I just read the DMOS page to see what people were talking about. Dear god, I wish I hadn't bothered.

There was simply too much thought put into those complaints...

What do you mean by that?

You were convinced?

Too much detail put into immature whining, I imagine. XD

Woah, Equestria Daily reported on the Daring Do page. I wonder who brought it to there attention?

I took the liberty of putting together a list of who is working on which Daring-Do fic, since we didn't seem to have one. I turned comments on, so leave a note if you claim a fic or have other pertinent information.

EDIT: Would help if I didn't delete my link before posting: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A9heodUZGo1iW8xwdmtzR5RWj1l-WJQeng97fIamgaM/edit

edited 12th Feb '12 3:35:01 PM by KuroiTsubasaTenshi

Yes that.

There was so much angry ranting over such small little details.

edited 12th Feb '12 3:35:36 PM by ApplelightLimited