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#59701 gingerninja 666 Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:30:29 AM from Aboard The Damocles

It's badly written?

Admittedly, all the angsty descriptions of how shitty his town is started to make me laugh after a while

edited 24th Dec '11 11:30:37 AM by gingerninja666

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#59702 Fallen Legend Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:30:43 AM from Mexico City!

yes yes it is

edited 24th Dec '11 11:31:40 AM by FallenLegend

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#59703 thefran Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:31:03 AM from a microwave oven

I see what you did with my name there.

It is rewritable!

BA DUM TSS

but it's one of the best stories I've ever read.

One of the things my literature prof endlessly drilled us about is "Tell me a story".

edited 24th Dec '11 11:32:28 AM by thefran

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#59704 L Mage Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:32:07 AM from The Moon

Wait a minuet....looking at Fallout Equestria page and....is it the same Littlepip? The one from Luna Eclipsed? I thought he was a colt...>.>

edited 24th Dec '11 11:32:37 AM by LMage

#59705 gingerninja 666 Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:32:59 AM from Aboard The Damocles

No, different character

the name's a coincidence. FE came out BEFORE Luna Eclipsed

"Schneizel! So you ARE the puppet master behind all this!" - Lelouch Lamperouge

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#59706 42 Zombies Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:33:18 AM from The City

That's Pipsqueak. Littlepip is a mare, and less British.

edited 24th Dec '11 11:34:13 AM by 42Zombies

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#59707 CDRW Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:33:27 AM

@ Ginger, yeah. The angsty descriptions kind of got on my nerves at first, but I'm talking more about the technical aspects. It's been a while since I read it so I can't give specific examples, but it was littered with problems in the same class as tense switching and typos. The story badly needs an editor.

And Fleur is bestpony.

#59708 Red Savant Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:34:21 AM from Eastern US

@Ginger, if Mage is looking to break into our particular brand of fic, why not let him? =)

Can you think inside the chimney?

#59709 Seraphem Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:34:26 AM from Delamare

let see

there's And I Shall name Them Cuppins

WARNING, contain material NSFG (not safe for ginger)

Bailout.

Contains much AJ so very SFG

The Contest

Turns out The Quite Game from Stare master is real, and Fluttershy has to defend her title.

The Vinyl Scratch Tapes

Vinyl and Octavia host Equestria's first Radio show.

Shipping and Handling

Ditzy Doo gets fired from her current job and answers a want-ad for a pony with experience in "shipping"

Ponygeist

short yet fun Nightmare Night ghost story tale.

The CMC learn where little fillies come from.

Mythbuckers

Do i really need to say anything?

Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.

#59710 Fallen Legend Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:34:31 AM from Mexico City!

No offense to fallout I am sure he did an awesome job. But I simply can't picture a grimdark equestria. It wouldn't be the same

I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen, not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else. C. S. Lewis

#59711 L Mage Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:35:45 AM from The Moon

This

#59712 gingerninja 666 Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:36:47 AM from Aboard The Damocles

@Red It's hard though.

He's gay, and he only likes humanizations. That narrows the number of clopfics that would appeal to him down substantially

"Schneizel! So you ARE the puppet master behind all this!" - Lelouch Lamperouge

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#59713 CDRW Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:37:33 AM

Actually, I had that same thought beforehand, but it's absolutely amazing how kkat meshed the two worlds, and I think the story of how Equestria ended up the way it did is extremely believable. After she somehow got me to swallow Pinkie Pie basically becoming Big Brother, I was willing to believe anything she wrote.

edited 24th Dec '11 11:38:31 AM by CDRW

And Fleur is bestpony.

#59714 gingerninja 666 Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:40:56 AM from Aboard The Damocles

Stop trying to get everyone to read that damn thing. I don't wanna be the only person in the world who doesn't love it

(I'm not being serious, don't worry)

edited 24th Dec '11 11:41:54 AM by gingerninja666

"Schneizel! So you ARE the puppet master behind all this!" - Lelouch Lamperouge

Tealove is best pony

#59715 Badwolfwho Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:42:01 AM

Short things, eh?

The Hiccups

The Best Night Ever

Not Short but I really like. Heart of Gold, Feathers of Steel.

Moonbeam.

Moonspire Run

(Woo Rainbow Dash)

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#59716 CDRW Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:42:43 AM

I know you're not serious. Neither am I.

Pfft! How can I not extole the virtues of The Great American Classic? (Note: If kkat is not actually American, I move for immediate annexation of whatever her location is.)

edited 24th Dec '11 11:43:27 AM by CDRW

And Fleur is bestpony.

#59717 thefran Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:42:58 AM from a microwave oven

The story badly needs an editor.

You just described 90% of fanfic.

Although agreed. I was like YOU STOP SWITCHING TENSES RIGHT NOW, YOUNG MAN

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#59718 Whatshisgame Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:43:01 AM

About "The Last Roundup", don't forget that it's included on the DVD The Friendship Express, meaning it'll most likely involve the Friendship Express Train (and probably in a big role, since the train's only other appearance has been during the Cold Opening of "Hearth's Warming Eve").

#59719 Rich Reeders Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:44:18 AM from The land of Dirt

Greetings to all on the site, every last member
On the day before christmas, twenty-fourth of December
Fifth night of Chanukah, don't think I forgot
This greeting's for all a simple kind thought
It's been a long year for all, but soon it wiil end
So spend that time together with both family and friend
Take the day off, pray don't visit here
Your family's more important; the ones you hold dear
The site will still be here come the day after,
So get off the internet and trade for fun, food and laughter
Celebrate what you will, and I hope you have fun
Happy holidays to all; all and everyone!

Can think outside the box, inside the chimney and would really like a Tylenol, thanks.

#59720 CDRW Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:45:36 AM

Zecora has learned how to break the fourth wall, and she's friendly!!!!!

And Fleur is bestpony.

#59721 gingerninja 666 Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:45:52 AM from Aboard The Damocles

@badwolf

The Best Night Ever is NOT what I'd call SHORT!!!

"Schneizel! So you ARE the puppet master behind all this!" - Lelouch Lamperouge

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#59722 Dhana Ragnarok Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:47:34 AM from my space lab in space

Nice one, Rich !

However, our family dinner always is the 25th, so I'll stay here...alone...

edited 24th Dec '11 11:47:53 AM by DhanaRagnarok

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#59723 CDRW Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:49:08 AM

Honestly not really looking forward to Christmas this year because of family drama though. I need ponies to calm my nerves and put on a good show.

And Fleur is bestpony.

#59724 Badwolfwho Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:50:35 AM

It's only 5 chapters.

edited 24th Dec '11 11:50:50 AM by Badwolfwho

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#59725 gingerninja 666 Sat, 24th Dec '11 11:52:37 AM from Aboard The Damocles

Each chapter being FUCKING MASSIVE!!!

"Schneizel! So you ARE the puppet master behind all this!" - Lelouch Lamperouge

Tealove is best pony