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#9576 L Mage Fri, 17th Feb '12 11:34:00 AM from The Never Never

Suited For Success and the episode where Fluttershy became a model mostly. It's refreshing for a fashion loving, high cultured, somewhat shallow, character to be both nice and generous.

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#9577 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 11:35:23 AM

In poni news, I've scrapped my fanfic idea.

#9578 Karl Kadaver Fri, 17th Feb '12 11:43:20 AM from Hunched over at my desk.

I can agree with you there. I think it's a toss-up over which pony is the most genuinely kind between Fluttershy and Rarity. It's no surpise that they're such good friends.

Give the world the best you have and you will get kicked in the teeth. Give the world the best you have anyway.

#9579 Crowind Fri, 17th Feb '12 11:43:53 AM

Rarity is superficial but I wouldn't really call her shallow

#9580 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 11:45:52 AM

It was too... Unoriginal. And even though I should have a really good grasp of English grammar... I really don't.

Karl, did you enjoy reading the first chapter I sent you?

edited 17th Feb '12 11:46:32 AM by ACrackInTime

#9581 Karl Kadaver Fri, 17th Feb '12 11:49:05 AM from Hunched over at my desk.

@ Crack - I really did.

Give the world the best you have and you will get kicked in the teeth. Give the world the best you have anyway.

#9582 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 11:51:00 AM

Well... Maybe I should continue it...

#9583 Karl Kadaver Fri, 17th Feb '12 11:58:23 AM from Hunched over at my desk.

I liked reading it, but I won't force you. If you've really lost your muse, don't force yourself to write it. It never ends well.

And like I said, if you have any questions, don't hesitate to PM me.

Give the world the best you have and you will get kicked in the teeth. Give the world the best you have anyway.

#9584 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:02:25 PM

I still want to write it... But I just need to plan it. I have no idea what's going to happen, other than the ending.

#9585 Rainbow Matt Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:03:21 PM from Poneyville

Just make sure Rainbow Dash ends up best poni :3

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#9586 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:04:53 PM

She's the one who finds Applejack. I'm thinking of switching the POV to Rainbow, since I view her as being the closest to Applejack, and thus the one who will be hurt the most.

#9587 Karl Kadaver Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:15:18 PM from Hunched over at my desk.

Why not write a chapter from each of their points of view? That'd be interesting.

Give the world the best you have and you will get kicked in the teeth. Give the world the best you have anyway.

#9588 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:17:34 PM

Hey, yeah... The last one will be Rainbow's view, but it would intereting experimenting with the other character's POV.

#9589 Gespenst KAF Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:20:13 PM from Not a clue

Temporary breakaway.

Derpy is my favorite pony.

We now return to the previous discussion already in progress.

I am not lost: I am merely suffering a temporary misplacement of myself

#9590 Karl Kadaver Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:20:33 PM from Hunched over at my desk.

Heh.

I tend to do that a lot in my fiction. I like writing as Twilight (because she's most like how I would normally write) and Pinkie Pie (because I can just write the first funny thing that comes into my head).

edited 17th Feb '12 12:20:50 PM by KarlKadaver

Give the world the best you have and you will get kicked in the teeth. Give the world the best you have anyway.

#9591 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:20:58 PM

I was just about to take our discussion to PMs...

#9592 Pykrete Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:26:36 PM from Viridian Forest

Rarity was my least favorite by far, but she grew on me and I'm not exactly sure when. Like, I had to mute the whining bit the first time but now it makes me giggle.

Favorite is Applejack. Girl's a rock solid bastion of sanity in a world out to crush it

#9593 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:27:56 PM

I like Rarity because of her Large Ham moments. Her epic breakdown in "Suited For Success" had me laughing hysterically.

#9594 marston Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:29:36 PM from America

My favorite use to be a tie between Twilight and Rainbow Dash, but lately I kinda have trouble deciding who's my favorite out of the mane 6. Their all awesome in their own ways.

edited 17th Feb '12 12:30:18 PM by marston

#9595 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:30:15 PM

I like all the Mane Six, but Rainbow Dash is my favourite.

AND SHE READS, LIKE ME!

#9596 Balmung Fri, 17th Feb '12 12:51:30 PM from Omaha, Nebraska

Twilight is best pony, then Luna.

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#9597 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 1:01:26 PM

Once I've done the edits to my story...

Would you like to read it?

#9598 marston Fri, 17th Feb '12 1:16:44 PM from America

Perhaps. What exactly is it about {Besides the ovbious anwser that it's a ponyfic}?

#9599 A Crack In Time Fri, 17th Feb '12 1:22:43 PM

It's what I thought "The Last Roundup" would be about. Applejack screws up something and believes that things would be better without her. The other Mane Six go hunting for her.

#9600 marston Fri, 17th Feb '12 1:28:41 PM from America

Intreasting. You said that the first chapter is up, correct? What's it called where did you upload it?