@Story he does say fear.
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I don't read fan fics. Does that count as critique?
edited 9th Jul '12 6:24:36 PM by Chadaman99
Everything's been done. Everything has a meaning. However your life at best is to serve as a building block for others.
Well is there any final critiques on chapter one of my fanfic? I'm about to upload the 2nd revision.
ZABUNGAH
@Sky: Yeah, the final fight was one of my favorites so far.
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Still don't know how they pulled that awesome mix of comedy and drama.
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Quote fail, cause of two post of the same quote.
edited 9th Jul '12 6:31:36 PM by Chadaman99
Everything's been done. Everything has a meaning. However your life at best is to serve as a building block for others.
he does say fear.
What is that responding to?
Life is simple: it has no nontrivial normal subgroups.
@Lurker Someone pointed out the only character who never breaks the fourth wall is Magnus the human. Maybe the fact that the gods are omniscient explains their genre savviness.
If you stare into the abyss long enough, it stares into you.
Element of Indecision.
I can honestly say that Kid Icarus: Uprising is one of the best uses of No Fourth Wall known to man. You'd think that being so self-referential would take away from the plot and emotion, but it really doesn't. Ever.
I loved the Super Bash Sisters bit, and how he starts out facing the wall.
Life is simple: it has no nontrivial normal subgroups.
@story "Darn you, balanced gameplay."
If you stare into the abyss long enough, it stares into you.
Element of Indecision.
So anyone want to talk about favorite VG protagonists again? Quote was pretty cool.
Life is simple: it has no nontrivial normal subgroups.
Monopoly is a terrible game.
Life is simple: it has no nontrivial normal subgroups.
How can a pony use a controller any way? Or what would it look like?
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Egh our preacher owns us on that fancy version he has. It's not fun losing.
edited 9th Jul '12 6:41:21 PM by Chadaman99
Everything's been done. Everything has a meaning. However your life at best is to serve as a building block for others.
Ooh! I know who I can list! Lee Everett.
It's mostly luck based and a huge time waster. It's essentially Chutes and Ladders for adults.
Life is simple: it has no nontrivial normal subgroups.
I wonder what Pony
Puerto Rico would be like. They probably wouldn't have slavery for one thing.
Life is simple: it has no nontrivial normal subgroups.
Marathon is awesome.
Journalism is just a gun. It's only got one bullet in it, but if you aim right, that's all you need.
I've never played it.
Life is simple: it has no nontrivial normal subgroups.
it's free these days I believe. So if you can, give it a look, story.
edited 9th Jul '12 6:49:23 PM by Drenius
Journalism is just a gun. It's only got one bullet in it, but if you aim right, that's all you need.