Well, on the whole it looks pretty good. you've definitely improved.
Woohoo!
there are still issues with it
Expected!
- the breasts look kinda saggy by virtue of us not actually seeing where the arms start, or perhaps they're simply that HUGE.
Oh, right... Though they are meant to be
smaller than
my last and incredibly silly attempt but still somewhat sizeable.
Huh, the arms are sort of busied in there, aren't they? I'll take note of that,
Her eye is a bit... odd, as well. It seems vaguely empty, I suppose. Like, it's looking, but it isn't... focusing?
The folds in the bottom of her dress are a bit unnatural as well; fabric tends to flow along the limbs below it, and hers just looks like it's sort of rippling.
Expected, I have issues with clothing folds in general and in this case, it's made worse since it's hard to make natural looking folds with a mouse.
However, I really like how you chose not to put lines around her hair. It's a very interesting choice. Her cutie marks create a very interesting effect with her skintone as well,
Thank you
and I like the way you've built her face - the racisal features are very clear without being charaicatured.
Thank you, though I indented her to be racially ambiguous, like how
Gaia is meant to look like a a little bit of everything.
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