@David's pic: That's...weird. Not as bad as I was expecting, but still weird.
Yeah, Andromeda is heading for you. You got over 9000 years until it collides.
so question, is the pony fanfiction thread supposed to be about talking about fics we like, or about people talking about and getting feedback on fics they are writing?
Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.
What the heck was the sniper pony doing during that whole fight? Also, the Zombie is Derpy right? And the 200 year old cake stuff is from the games too?
If there is anything that you are alone in thinking, it's "thinking that you're alone in thinking of your theories".
his job, yes, and yes.
though she's called Ditzy in this one.
edited 28th Apr '12 3:46:24 PM by Seraphem
Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.
@Seraph The dialogue and characterization never stopped being awesome, but c'mon. Ya gotta admit that the Enclave were pretty damn lousy compared to Red Eye and the Goddess.
... and I wasn't a fan of Ditzy (but I know that's unique to me)
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel
Not arguing they weren't, just that it DOES work with what we've sen so far, but yes it COULD have been done better with them, but it wasn't all that bad. Though unlike you i LOVED the last two chapters.
Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.
There was nothing for me to enjoy in the final battle...
The only time the Enclave came close to being competent was when Colonel Autumn showed up, and does everyone remember how long HE shows up for?
edited 28th Apr '12 3:49:13 PM by gingerninja666
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel
I know what your issues with at are..and they are valid, just not ones I share.
Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.
his job
The Raiders have a formal employment system??? Personally, if I heard gunshots downbelow I'd go down to investigate, not wait up top to get shot in the back.
If there is anything that you are alone in thinking, it's "thinking that you're alone in thinking of your theories".
but the Enclave don't even work as a menacing force. because they AREN'T menacing.
With Red Eye and the Alicorns I feared for the cast's life. With the Enlave... I just didn't think there was any tension
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel
I rather not...
Ug, more rule 34.
If there is anything that you are alone in thinking, it's "thinking that you're alone in thinking of your theories".
nah more like Raiders dint give a shit about anyone else, hearing shots from below is probably pretty damn common as they shoot each other, the prisoners, imaginary creatures etc....
Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.
also....yuck
Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.
ponicidal
Now that's an interesting word.
If there is anything that you are alone in thinking, it's "thinking that you're alone in thinking of your theories".
Am I the only guy who didn't like the Enclave or something.
I swear this isn't even related to my preferences, I swear their pressense and the way they were used wholeheartedly weakens the story
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel
They were, just a differnt type, they had Shock and Awe, but also had there weak spots. yes they weren't as menacing on a personal level, but still quite the threat to the wasteland as a whole.
Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.
Is this the book she got
?
And the Raiders are just weird. Are they actually insane? It's like they've been corrupted
to do evil regardless of it's utility.
If there is anything that you are alone in thinking, it's "thinking that you're alone in thinking of your theories".
They could have been handled better, but it still works for me.
Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.
@ Story yes
and kinda, basically Lil'pip comes to the conclusion that raiders are ponies that have just been pushed past the
Despair Event Horizon by life in the wasteland and just don't give a buck about anything and yeah, are a few screws lose.
Build a fool proof system, and the world will create a better fool.
@Seraph WEAK POINTS?!
They were completely undisciplined. Everytime we see them inner dissention amongst their ranks
FUCKS them over or otherwise makes them less credible.
"Contests fought between two masters are decided instantly. An invisible battle is now raging between the two of them." Lulu vs Schneizel