Hey Mousa! Not sure if you saw my critique the first time you asked for it, so here it is again.
@Mousa, RE: art of the list: Hm....
Hm...
Well, first of all you sound a bit too close to the microphone. Like, your voice sounds really fuzzy and just kinda off... I'd say either turn down your mic reception or back away from it. Your volume will be lower, and you'll get a much clearer sound.
As far as the singing itself, it's alright, though you're a bit clutzy and it's usually fairly clear when you pause for breath. But I don't imagine you do much singing, so it's forgivable. Your voice itself
sounds nice, but it's hampered by the issues with delivery
The lyrics are pretty good(I think; the muffled delivery makes it hard to make out a bit, as does poor enunciation in some spots), and certainly fit Twilight's character. I could imagine a bit of animation actually going along with it, which I imagine was probably the intention. Thing is, though, while your general rhythm is there the lyrics stumble and force a few beats. Like, I can hear you trying to stretch a single syllable across a beat where there should be two, and occasionally you have a two-syllable word where it just sounds like there should be a word change. Things like that. I'd try comparing your lyrics side by side with the original, saying them out loud and seeing how they feel next to each other. If it doesn't feel spot-on, try reworking it.
On the whole, it's... alright. I've certainly heard worse, but I wouldn't quite call it good. Passable, yes. But not really exemplary in any way. Had it been something I'd stumbled across on Youtube, I probably wouldn't have finished.
TL;DR: Move away from your mic to get better voice reception, work a bit on the lyrics to make them flow better, and enunciate a bit better while you're singing. It's not terrible, but it's not great.