So, I got and read the second microseries issue today!
I'd say it's about on the same level as the first overall - the art is a bit better, but I think the writing is a teensy bit worse. It absolutely adores alliteration and seems to like it's references(There's one to
A Space Oddity at least, to say nothing of the
Frank Frazetta cover). These on their own are fine, but they aren't really handles as well as I feel like they could have been. Coupled with a metric butt-ton of
The Power of Friendship (Flight and The Sonic Rainboom appear to be powered by happiness[?], which is coincidentally also toxic to the sky gremlins, who run on negative emotions like hate, depression and frustration), the comic comes across as really, REALLY corny. Not necessarily a bad corny, and it did have me smiling and laughing along, it just felt weird.
There were also some moments that I feel were handled odd. For example, at the end of the comic
Dash pulls off a double rainboom(Which is kind of hilarious in the wake of Double Rainboom), destroying the evil cloud home of the sky gremlins by making everypony happy(and irradiating AJ's apple crop), but in the process basically cripples her wings. Cut to two months later, she still hasn't flown since then... and Applejack shows up and starts making jokes about it. Like, borderline making fun of Dash. She then feeds Dash some irradiated apple pie, which apparantly makes Dash happy enough that she can fly again, because I guess her lack of it was psychosomatic. Either that or the radiation gave her enough magic to fly, I dunno. There's also several minor irks with the goings-on, like the fact that
only Dash is trying to get rid of this cloud, and the townsponies appear to be getting mad at her for failing to do so.
But like I said, the writing isn't bad - it was entertaining and funny, and there's actually a lot of moments that I really like in it, like when the gremlins describe Dash's hate as "music to [their] bones", the alien sense aspect of which I think makes for a really good image. Dash is kept at least close to her character, sometimes shying into the egotistical side of things, and there's a very nice moment where she gets to show some genuine concern for Tank - their relationship is constant throughout it all, and very nice to see. Dash talks to Tank more often than anypony in the comic, in fact, which is kinda need.
The art, as I said, is a bit better, mostly in that I don't find it annoying anymore. It's still sub-par compared to the main series, but they've got the anatomy right by this point at least. It has a very classic, cartoony sort of style, especially the 'special effects' like the Sonic Rainboom and the gremlins' thunder attacks, and I really liked the design of the sky germlins(Who it should be mentioned are just really good antagonists in general). Overall though, the art is just kinda there when compared to the writing.
So yeah - generally on par with the first, which means that while it's good it's really nothing spectacular. Still, I
can see the series going to decent places, as ever, so I look forward to Rarity's issues next month.