Yeah, that definitely is a pretty cool idea.

Not as open as with most background ponies; she does have◊ a◊ few◊ All There in the Manual descriptions. Still pretty open, though.

I consider my fics as AU because while I tend to build off of the canon as much as possible, the story will often cause it to deviate a bit. While they're possible, their plotlines are unlikely to be addressed by the show, so best case scenario status will always be "not jossed yet."

Happy Doctor Whooves/Hooves/Time Turner/etc.

Poker face Twilight◊ needs to be added to the repository.

Celestia in the bath.

edited 30th Jul '12 3:34:22 PM by SkyStrike

I put Gilda in between a rock and a hard place◊

So very, very strange...

@Drenius Why Applejack and not, say, Fluttershy?

Was there ever any doubt?

edited 30th Jul '12 3:43:48 PM by SkyStrike

@Turtle: There's a Gilda blindbag?! I...

I need that.

@Drenius: Not sure if want.

Hey check it out, it's that guy

Ditto.

edited 30th Jul '12 3:48:04 PM by Drenius

@Drenius How is he holding that candle?

@ Sky: Very carefully. Or through magic, I don't know.

edited 30th Jul '12 3:48:55 PM by Drenius

@Red I think it's actually part of a set with RD and the Surprise-ish Wonderbolt.

@Drenius That pony's cutie Mark looks a bit like a noose...

edited 30th Jul '12 3:50:53 PM by crowlover

I think that's because it is, crow.

Dangerous Business fanart

@crowlover That's what Candlejack does, he ohwaitididntmeant

Well, I think he ties you up rather than hangs you, which is what a noose implies.

Also, What...

http://drawception.com/viewgame/1DF2HxpHOM/evil-unicorn/

Ended with MLP Joker.

http://drawception.com/viewgame/KP37XgA31Z/twilight-sparkle-pun-intended/

more MLPFIM games.

edited 30th Jul '12 4:09:38 PM by DeathCloud

Maybe she's a dentist.

Gilda isnt really a blindbag, she comes in a minifigure set with Rainbow Dash and a Wonderbolt with no name. I like to think that she's surprise because she's got a yellow mane and white fur!

Looks like they are out of stock on the Hasbro site, but here is a link to the set

OH GOD THAT WAS HORRIBLE I BARELY MADE IT OUT ALIV-

8 bucks for 3 figures? That's awesome.

The other indication being that the outhouse apparently has modern plumbing.

Ah, thanks, Turtle. =)

So is JT still here? I guess I should give my thoughts on A Delicate Balance.

The main issues I noticed were:
* At the very beginning, Twilight refers to herself in both first and second person, which is disconcertiting. You should rewrite it to be consistent.
* What is the significance of Twilight picking up the water with her hoof rather than telekinesis? I don't get it.
* I'd cut down on the number of times Pinkie goes off on long tangents. It's funny in moderation but when she does it every time it's just annoying.

Other than that, everything looked great. I especially liked the lawnmower bit.

Thanks for the feedback. Twilight's kinda talking to herself at the start, and I've seen lots of flip-flopping in stuff like that in other works, but if it's that distracting I guess I should tweak it. The "picking things up with her hooves" is just an indication of the fact that she's really flustered and kinda freaked out. As for Pinkie, she was originally more laid back, but then I got feedback that she wasn't active enough. I dunno, I guess it just depends on your tolerance for her antics.

edited 30th Jul '12 4:44:34 PM by JapaneseTeeth

The thing is that even in the show, she doesn't go off on long tangents all the time.