@storyyeller But it can be Traced...

EDIT: Now for a different Pagetopper

edited 1st Mar '12 12:47:39 PM by crowlover

@ Mousa: Work on the face. Also, Celestia looks like she's leaning a little and is on the verge of dropping off the page. Luna looks really good, it's just Celestia that needs work. Also, work on the hair, it's too rough around the edges and should flow smoothly, not look immobile. Lastly, Celestia's face looks a little too serious. But it's really good. Better than a lot of the stuff I've made at least XD

Also, now that I look again, Luna's arms are put behind in a way that makes them look shorter than anatomically possible.

edited 1st Mar '12 12:49:46 PM by ilsemmr

Yep, it could be Skill Swapped in Gen III

—sniffle—

Art criticism. I missed you so much. —snuggles—

@ Mousa: Let's see. I think overall, her frame is too bulky. She wouldn't be lithe, but still not that thick. (I think reducing the knockers ((Not too much though!)) will actually do a lot for that though.) Her hair should be longer, and the lines in it more parallel, and I think her facial features need to be closer together. Last of all, the crown is sitting in front of her head, not on it. It needs to interact with her hair. I like what you did with her cutie marks though. That looks awesome.

Note: Take everything I say with a grain of salt. I don't know jack-shit.

edited 1st Mar '12 12:48:47 PM by CDRW

Hi everyone. (dies)

I fucking hate directing. I literally feel like dying right now.

btw, you guys should feel thank FO:E. because of it Im no longer incredibly dead set against romance in mlp.

Assuming all the guys are as awesome as Applesnack (AJ's husband in FO:E) that is...

I need to collapse

Keep your chin up Ginger! (I mean that literally, it actually helps you get over stress and bad feelings.) Bad day on the set I take it?

@Ils, Not quite what I meant but those are still very decent criticisms.

My plan is to give them a complete design overhaul, I get the feeling the first time was too rushed. I can come up with something better... I think....

edited 1st Mar '12 12:50:23 PM by MousaThe14

What are you looking for? Clothing design?

The last time I drew something for fun was this.

My entire art life has been swamped by my art class.

edited 1st Mar '12 12:51:51 PM by MrAHR

@Ginger: What's the problem? Are the actors being uncooperative or something?

Also, I finally got around to adding myself to the pokemon spreadsheet. I have the crappiest moveset ever. Well, aside from Judgement.

No, clothing's fine, I mean the character's themselves. Is there anything I can do differently, nose, mouths, skin tone, height, body type, anything.

Though the crown thing is definitely helpful.

I like the design of the top part of her dress, but the bottom part is a lot heavier. If she's showing that much skin up top, the bottom shouldn't be so bulky, and should show some leg. Probably with a side-slit.

Okay, the clothing is apparently not fine, I'll get to that too.

It's fine enough. I was just putting my two cents in since somebody mentioned the clothes and you said complete overhaul. You actually ninja'd me.

edited 1st Mar '12 12:55:16 PM by CDRW

Cause I really liked the clothing and the style. Very cool. Especially how you put the cutie marks on the shoulders. Although you should probably increase Celestia's empire waist-band thing a little higher when you decrease her breast size. In empire-waist dresses like this one, the band should be right underneath the breasts.

I love her dress, btw. I wanna buy it and take it to a formal ball. O_O

Also, I was at first gonna complain about how Luna has a very old-fashioned looking dress, then realized that's like Fridge Brilliance. Luna is old-fashioned! XD

@JT No. The actors were lovely. Some of the best people I've ever met.

I'm not cut to be in charge of ANYONE. I'm an unorganized wreck. Incapable of maneuvering other people to do anything correctly. I can follow orders, but I can't order other people.

...and the projector we were using exploded. Postponing 2 thirds of my filming until next week

Is this the first time you're directing? If so, it stands to reason that the first time is going to be rough.

You don't have to pay for the projector do you? Because I imagine that's pretty pricy.

An explosion? Really?

@Ginger Don't give up, don't doubt yourself, reflect on what happened, and improve.

Hey guys, FINISHED MY MIDTERMS!! Time for ponies

@JT Yes it is. butthis also counts towards most of my grade.

I don't WANT to be a director, I HATE it. I don't want all this responsibility because I know someone much better than me can do the job better!

...I'm ok. Just incredibly shaken by all this.

@CDRW No, I don't. It wasn't our fault anyway.

Give me a job to do on a film set and I'll do it to the absolute best of my abilities, just don't expect me to look after others too

edited 1st Mar '12 1:03:20 PM by gingerninja666

@ginger Yeah, Applesnack was awesome coltfriend. And that romance is not even focus of any bigger part of fic.

That's what responsibility is, unfortunately. You have to take charge.

Sweet. Don't you just love that feeling of being done?

edited 1st Mar '12 1:05:58 PM by CDRW