Pinkie wants to play a game.

Truer words have never been spoken, Princess.

Turns out we're going to learn the name of Celestia's other niece.

@Applelight -

TACTICAL CRITICISM INCOMING!

I am not artist, but I will say what I can.

- Art - Firstly, the character designs lack the sharpness and general impact. You are practicing, so this shouldn't be a problem in the future.

Also, there is no background. I can't put it specifically, but it feels lacking.

- Words - The introduction feels a bit too banal. Also, I have no idea what kind of format you will use, but actually putting a description into a character that isn't shrouded in mystery and plainly exhibited in the very same panel feels awfully redundant. In adddition, you mentioned scars but I am not seeing any; you have to show what you mean, in visual media you have even less excuse than the literary ones.

All in all, this isn't really catching my interest. But obviously this is your first work and almost nobody churns out masterpieces in the beginning. So, keep on with your work and practice a lot.

I hope you find this useful.

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Well, that's it for today. Good night, folks.

edited 3rd Feb '13 8:53:09 PM by dRoy

I actually made it up as I went along, using my script and looking at the opening of one piece for inspiration. But now that I made it, I can see what it needs for improvement.

Thank you. That's very helpful.

edited 3rd Feb '13 8:54:58 PM by ApplelightLimited

Also, in the bottom left panel the text goes over the lines, making it hard to read.

Yep. I see that too now.

Must make sure to polish it better in future.

Princess Platinum cosplay

Is that Recursive Cosplay?

@Applelight: I left some suggestions for you in the fanfic thread.

Thanks JT, really.

edited 3rd Feb '13 9:15:44 PM by ApplelightLimited

You're welcome.

And now I go to sleep.

G'night JT.

Night JT!

I'll be going too. Goodnight, and I apologize for spacing out so hard I posted nearly nothing today.

Night JT, Night Lopinny!

I'm going to bed too. Night everyone.

See you sleepyheads later.

:3

Delivery tantrum

edited 3rd Feb '13 10:11:10 PM by AceOfScarabs

Night Apple

Nah, it's okay, Fluttershy. He'll be fine.

@Ace: Yeah, the sleepers will come back. They always do.

Boredom

There was a question on the Justice Dine's enemies. Well, there are several of them. They include:

Poisoned Icecream

Less Foodhere

Veal Cabbage

The Pinkquince

Darkseed

Black Apple

etc.

Anyway, I've previouly stated that Twilight Sparkle shares the position of protagonist who is my favourite character with one other that I can think of: Thrice-Radiant Misho. I've also noted that they have alot in common, including both being Twilights. Now, we've previously mapped the characters to The Order of the Stick, but I don't think we have to Keychain of Creation.

So, let's try:

Misho: Twilight obviously.

Marena: Rarity.

Secret: Fluttershy. Who else coud the most adorable abomination in Creation be? Thn again, Fluttershy could also fit with Blossom. Though Blossom could also be Sweetie Bot.

Ten Winds: Rainbow Dash, I guess.

Karen: I'm thinking Applejack. But I'm not sure. Big Mac and Shining Armor might also fit. Or maybe Big Mac should be Ten Winds as he's older and he can replace "JUSTICE!" with "Eeyup." In which case RD could also fit Karen, possibly.

Then, I guess that Pinkie could be Nova.

Resonance Ben can be a Flim Flam brother.Flame can be Trixie, so I guess Five-Waves' Fury would be Snips or Snails.

The fae can be changelings.

The First and Forsaken Lion can be Discord.

I would like a t-shirt with this

Tickling :3

...Okay :3

Trixie

edited 4th Feb '13 5:41:47 AM by AceOfScarabs

SO ADORABLE

Just don't let her bite you in the leg, I guess.

If she bites me, do I become a werepony...wolf?

Hello again, what'd I miss?